Yesterday erskine stood tall
Today it has been grafittied all over
Yesterday the windows were all shiny
Today they are broken.
Yesterday the doors opened
Today they are slammed shut
Yesterday the children were learning
Today the children just explore
Yesterday the court was used for basketball
Today it is spray painted by naughty people

What a stunning poem Jacob! I love the structure you have used!
ReplyDeletemadison says I love your pome I hope you put more on your blog
ReplyDeletemadison say Jacob amazing pome I love it so much
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem. Have you written any more? I'd like to see them!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Well done, dude
ReplyDeleteI'd love to read more of your poems, Jacob. I'm very proud of you - fantastic job!
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